Sort of cool imagining of near-future when a Google-like company has seized control of almost the complete world. There is forward momentum throughout and its an easy read.
Many flaws though. Awful dialogue that sounds mostly like editorials, thin characterizations (particularly of the narrator, Mae), gigantically obvious and silly metaphors (the Aquarium replicating the bottom of the Mariana Trench).
I was increasingly reminded of Dosteovsky's Underground Man who seems embodied by the hapless, martyred Mercer who wants only to be left alone to construct his chandeliers out of antlers. Following on that, then, Mae is the proto-typcial Above-Ground Woman, who seeks to be completely known to society, completely "Transparent."
Talk not with scorn of Authors- it was the chattering of the Geese that saved the Capitol. Coleridge
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